Intro into Poetry


Sugar Weighs Less” (list poem)

 

The candy land scene of summer delights,

And the metal magicians with their scepters pulled

to pour an adventure of frozen flavors

sprinkled with cookie crumbs, Kit Kat crunch, and caramel drizzles-

rows littered with sugary substances.

 

The walls here are papered in happiness,

the floors tiled in joy.

 

Gummy bears hiding behind candy rocks,

while caramel turtles dive into a latte lake for

a boy that mounds his as high as a mountain.

His sister is more modest in her serving,

cupping a few candies calculating…

eyeing the hot fudge with more than a little interest.

 

Swirling mine around, mixed into a mush

blended to have that perfect mouthful,

masterpiece of all my ingredients.

Andes mints for that nice cool crisp,

Graham crackers for texture,

Cookie dough (always the best part of baking),

and of course one cherry without a stem,

dodging around the spoon for the last morsel.

 

Each cup a creation, to leave concerns at the corner or door

add some extra cake-batter, if they matter so much…

or at least till we must work out our way back home.


Sonnet   

 

“Socks, Keys, and the Point”

 

 

Although they turn in circles, socks are lost.

 

Our keys can hide so well within plain view.

 

The things we buy can carry hidden costs;

 

That after all the scoring will come due.

 

 

Our trains of thought decided to skip town,

 

until we looked and found them nearly gone.

 

We did attempt to find them though they drowned.

 

 

Resolves we have and never act upon

 

for games we’ll hide and counting up to ten.

 

A face we found, we thought we knew it so,

 

and names we knew yet find they fade again.

 

 

The point we miss: that things we keep can’t go

 

where we end up. I find the missing socks

 

reflect the skip of time more than the clocks.


The Line (Exploration Poem)

 

It stretched on like an organized mob of opinions coiling around the throat of the building, demanding ballads.

“IF YOU ARE IN DISTRICT 38 THAN YOU ARE IN THIS LINE, 39 THIS ONE.”    The man with the important lanyard nametag and map in hand, directed.

“I feel bad for the older people here; if they need to use the bathroom; there is no way they could get through all that.” They walked up with canes and large jackets ready for the long wait to once again have a say in the nation’s future.

“Hillary’s a tough old bitch and can get the job done, not to mention she has 40 years’ experience.” The bearded man repeated again and again to all the people he informed of his status in the line via cell phone.

“For how cold it is this really shows a lot of dedication!” We look and see the determination rear itself despite the less than ideal situation with steadfast patience to be given a pen.

“It was moving right along a moment ago; I guess they had to drop anchor…” People bobbing up and down with children breaking ranks to seize the open school yard a sort of allowed defiance while the adults hold the line.

“I can’t feel my toes anymore!” One parent surrenders to a child’s demands and you watch them jump awkwardly on the faded hopscotch pattern on nearby pavement. Little distractions to make the time move by. Little insubordination to battle the cold.

“Why the hell did they set up this elementary school for 2 districts!?”

“We may beat the 90 minutes wait time record.”

“It’s already been 90 minutes!” The crowd’s tired jeering increases, still unsettled from long days at work, but we keep waiting.

 “I should order pizza…’Ah yeah hi, Papa Johns, I’d like to get 600 pizzas delivered!’”

“Ha yeah, bet you could get 5 dollars a slice right about now!”

“No kidding!” For most, dinner time has come and gone and you can see the taxing stomachs are billing the rowed waiters’ moods.

“They could have set this up like a drive thru and it would have been more efficient.”

“Yeah I’d like to get 2 Bernies and a side of Hillary!” A small waft in the air of a meal someone prepared ahead of entering sets eyes and tongues searching.

“I don’t think they were expecting this much of a turn out.”

“This is what democracy looks like. “Their eyes lifting like flags and eagles.

“No. This is what a revolution looks like!” We finally breach the doorways spaced as tight as we can into the corridors of the small elementary school like the harbor of Staten, Angel, Ellis Island where so many of these lineages began. We hear the chanting like an anthem and follow its call.

“WHAT DO WE FEEL?!”

“WE FEEL THE BERN!”

“WHAT DO WE FEEL?!”

“WE FEEL THE BERN!”


Prose poem

 

“Comb the Cat”

 

I need to comb the cat and shred the extra envelopes they send me with the spam mail and color in the “O”s on all these magazine articles and scrub the back cabinet behind the old spices behind the new spices behind the can goods and fold the rags again they are leaning too much to the right and hold open the window to let the better air from the west on the fifth Tuesday in May when the sun shines between those two branches and when the traffic is at its lowest and copy down all the odd words from that email I got by mistake last week to see if they really did mean to send it to me and calculate when would be the best time to stack the dishes after the dishwasher is done with them so the risk of temperature fracturing is least likely to occur and watch a show on snails so I can finally answer that nagging question which is “can they feel the salt on everything?” oh and I need to make sure all the shoes in the house are on the correct side and while I’m at it the socks should be done too and that couch could be trimmed up a bit and I’m not sure if the cords could use some dusting or if every screw in everything needs some tightening but if they do, for Pete’s sake, that will just have to wait.


Intro Into Poetry Final Paper


Angela Fields

Professor Wade Bentley

Intro into Poetry  

10 April 2016                            

Poetry and Music

Though we call song with lyric simply music, if you go beyond the instrumentality of it, it is in most regards poetry. In older days, music and poetry met each other in a love story that has yet to run out of notes or words. A pairing that interlocks human emotion through melody and song and has transformed through the ages with opera, raps, musicals, jigs, or even a minstrel’s ballad or limerick though its effect on society or reflection of it, has not. Both parts, music and poetry, are essential and equally important in creating a product that some say is as necessary as breathing is to life.  Both can stand alone and hold a strong case, but the harmony they make together has become part of daily life. In modern society, it’s hard to say if music finds a niche in poetry or vice versa, but what can be said is that poetry keeps deep roots in the many ways written here and more, in each of our lives, whether we grant it that title or not.

            Poetry as rhyming, rhythmic, and at times, visually or emotionally appealing can be compared to music without words, giving that it likewise keeps a rhythm or time signature, flows with transitions, and carries an emotional base line. The use of punctuation in poetry is also replicated in music with breath notes and rests to create a mood or style in each. Music also displays a form of staffs or tablature just as poetry does stanzas and other visual forms of organization. Just as music’s individual notes indicate a sound or pause, together creating a harmonious result, poetry’s individual words indicate a particular thought, image, or feeling, the organized form of which becomes a gestalt of the original idea. Another similarity between music and poetry is that both are unique. When one writes a poem or song, the emotions they feel may have similar titles, but the way the individual perceives and relays them are always different. Likewise those listening to or reading the poem or hearing the song may interpret each differently.

            It may be because music and poetry are so similar in structure and drive to be created that the pair, when together, have uncountable applications to our everyday lives. One example of an application is nursery rhymes, simple in tune, rhyme, and rhythm. Scenes from these forms help children learn memorization, language skills, comparison of the placement of word and sound to images, and ideas along with other lessons. Not only do they help children remember the lessons but they also can become a means to more advanced reasoning and comprehension later, such as the uses of symbolism, metaphor, the strength of using imagery when reading and writing skills are still in developmental stages. The historical background of some nursery rhymes taught in these short phrases can later be used to assist learning as mnemonic tools.

An example of this is the nursery rhyme Baa Baa Black Sheep.

Baa Baa Black Sheep,
Have you any wool?
Yes, sir, yes, sir,
Three bags full;
One for the master,
One for the dame,
And one for the little boy
Who lives down the lane.

This nursery rhyme not only can teach a lesson of hard work and pride in one’s work, but in this context, a sense of community and possibly generosity. “Eensy, Weensy Spider” also gives lessons of determination in the face of pressing odds. However, if you were to research the meaning, a new lesson is found in some rhymes such as the example “Baa Baa Black Sheep” deep within the simple rhyme. Originally the last line before the end of the 16th century had read “And none for the little boy who cries down the lane,” and with this slight alteration a new meaning to the rhyme is uncovered. One historical interpretation is that

After returning from the crusades in 1272, Edward I imposed new taxes on the wool trade…It is believed that this wool tax forms the background to the rhyme. One-third of the price of each bag, or sack sold, was for the king (the master); one-third to the monasteries, or church (the dame); and none to the poor shepherd (the little boy who cries down the lane) who had tirelessly tended and protected the flock. (Castelow 7)

 In this use, the writer of “Baa Baa Black Sheep” relays the life of historic English sheep herders in a way that is concise, using devices of dialogue with rhythm and rhyme schemes. Normally, this nursery rhyme also uses a similar musical melody with slight variations known for its most popular song accompaniment “Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star.” The use of similar music, along with the use of simple rhyme is combined to help children remember specific lessons.

            Other examples of poetry represented in music are evident in many primary daily uses such as at the beginning of most sports games with our national anthem the “Star-Spangled Banner” or at some funerals or religious congregations with “Amazing Grace” and many other hymns.  “Amazing Grace” is iambic and alternates from six to eight syllable lines often known as hymn meter or common measure. When these devices are then included with the powerful music, the meaning and impact it has on us soars to even greater heights.

            Many musicians also include poetic devices in their music in a variety of ways, creating unique and interesting songs that stand out and are incorporated in our everyday routines. For some, it becomes even part of the very fabric of the musical genre. Rap music is an example of such uses of poetic devices. Other musical artists have not only become popular for incorporating poetry into their music but have also produced works of poetry literature such as Jewel, with her A Night Without Armor book and In His Own Words by John Lennon. Not only do musicians sometimes write poetry in addition to songs but often allude to them, such as Metallica’s reference to “For whom the bell tolls” also a title to an Ernest Hemmingway book but that was chosen from a line by John Donne poem entitled, “No Man is an Island”.

            A good example of a musician who pays close attention to poetic devices is one of my favorites, Alanis Morissette. In her song “A Man” the opening stanza is in pentameter:

I am a man as a man I've been told
Bacon is brought to the house in this mold
Born of your bellies I yearn for the cord
Years I have groveled repentance ignored

There is a careful use of the meter to hold the beat of the song as well as her use of couplets for a rhyming scheme. Another is the song “Past-Due” by The Weakerthans, which demonstrates even more impressive uses of poetic devices and is in sonnet form.

February always finds you folding
Local papers open to the faces
Who past away to wonder what they're holding
In those hands were never shown the places

Formal photographs refuse to mention
His tiny feet that birthmark on her knee
The tyranny of framing our attention
All the eyes, their eyes no longer see

And darkness comes too early, you won't find
The many things you owe these latest dead
A borrowed book, that check you didn't sign
Tools to be believed with be beloved

Give what you can to keep to comfort this
Plain fear you can't extinguish or dismiss (Weakerthans)

Similarities between music and poetry are numerous, and the combinations the two can form have uses in all aspects of our world. Though it can be said that poetry in society today does not often follow as strict a form as it may have once, so too can this be said of music.  It’s poetry’s ability to adapt to the times and a generation’s emotions or needs while still retaining an identity as poetry, lending itself to the change, that all of these benefits find places in our minds, hearts and lives.  The world is shaped by many things, but it is our gift to have the ability to describe its course in these ways, with our words that give creatable meaning to its changes.

 


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Work Cited

Castelow, Ellen. , “More Nursery Rhymes.” historic-uk.com. Web. 10 April 2016.

Morissette, Alanis. “A Man.” Under Rug Swept. Track 8. Maverick, 2002. CD.

The Weakerthans. “Past-Due.” Hopelessly Devoted To You Vol.4. Track 5. Hopeless Records,                               

           2002. CD.

 

 


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